After I sent both the revised essay chapter and the postcard chapter to John yesterday, I looked through the message board chapter and it's horrible. There is very little usable stuff in it. I can't believe I spun my wheels there for so long. Anyway, the Ruud chapter is surprisingly good and just has to be edited in the present tense and tweaked a bit. Then I will have 3 chapters done and I think the message board chapter will shrink to just a part of the introduction or a small chapterling. The Ruud chapter fits well with the data chapters. The message board chapter misses completely. Oh well, who needs it.