Rain and Bill are sending me numerous responses to the RRN chapter. I knew that contacting them about the piece would cause more chaos to flow into the diss system but it also might shift some conclusions downstream. Bill has given me the go ahead for the chapter as it is. He said the essay was fine, he meant OK since he also gave me some new ideas for it too. But I have already put some of the recommendations into other parts of this chapter and other concerns will be addressed in the art pieces chapter which I hope will be more fun to write. Rain wrote in his punful style but what he requested I'm not sure. After I adjust to what I think he's requesting and get another response I'll ask for a permission to publish. By then I hope to have the conclusions concluded.