honoriartist (honoriartist) wrote,
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bridging essays

I found all the lost data and fortunately it didn't seem to go very far. Just the methods chapter was affected but I had back ups. Now I'm editing the longest chapter. It's 12 interviews formed into essays. Advisor John says the essays jump from thing to thing and advises creating bridges. I agree. I also need to trim drastically. So far I've edited a Banana, Baroni, Hoffberg, Held, and Dragonfly Dream...Now on to Geert's which is the longest essay. Since the essays all have been resting for a few months it's easier to edit them down to a reasonable length and build a few rickety bridges of meaning. They say it may snow this evening.
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